Let me just start out by saying, while I am new, I do know what I'm talking about. c: really.
vision It's pretty clear that you knew what you were looking for when you started on this. It's well planned, neat and minimalistic. Color is universally good, and the shading is smooth. Without intruding on Technique too much, this piece has a great vision.
originality I apologize, but I have to give you lower marks here. I've seen the same thing done dozens of times, in countless, almost indistinguishable variations. While it works good in this scenario, it's nothing new.
technique This is where the piece really shines. A high resolution, super thin & crisp lines, excellent body structure and beautiful matching colors make this a home run. It's the kind of art that's so detailed and seductive it keeps drawing your eyes back to it. Literally flawless here.
impact Does this piece have impact? Put simply: no, not really, but I hope it will. It's garnished some views and favs, but not much more. On the contrary, I believe that this could prove to be an excellent reference for beginner artists in the future. (me)